script writing

Writing somthing that would fit in to the 90 seconds was tricky. All the ideas I had already developed for an animated film were going to be far to long, I remembered a nursery rhym from when i was a kid about a rabbit beating up mice and so I have tried to adapt it. The song really sets the pace for the animation which is a good basis to work from. It became difficult to write the script in the right format but Story- boarding it really helped and most of the desriptive narative could be thrown out. the only problem now is to work out a decent twist at the end. the mice could have their revenge or perhaps somthing totally unforseen should happen , not sure yet but will tinker with it some more.